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Saturday, 13 March 2010

Adventure Stories


We are looking at adventure stories in our literacy lessons. We have all written our own sequel to the story Valiant. Here are a couple of extracts from the work written by Miss Cranmer’s group.


The Falcon came and grabbed Valiant. He swept up into the sky like a rocket. He threw him into a cage, but Valiant was both really brave and strong. He used his claw to open the old cage door’. (Reann)


Next, Valiant got his team together and went after Falcon with a great plan. Valiant said, ‘I am sick of your silly games. I am going to make sure that I win and that you are never seen again!’ Falcon decided to surrender’. (Robbie)


We will write the ending to our stories next lesson.

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